Your brief
- Main character: A teenager working their first shift in a nearly empty hotel.
- Setting: A quiet office on the evening before everybody moves buildings.
- Relationship: One owes the other a small favour that has become strangely important.
- Weather must change: A rainbow appears after an argument, but nobody is in the mood to admire it.
- Amusing incident: Someone's ringtone perfectly answers a question asked in the room.
- Complication: The obvious route is closed for a reason nobody can explain.
- Opening rule: Open with dialogue, but do not identify the speaker until the second paragraph.
- Structure: Use a quiet reversal instead of a shock twist.
- Dialogue: Use a single-word reply that changes the direction of the scene.
- Ending rule: End with a decision rather than an explanation.
- Tone: Make it feel like a rainy Sunday afternoon.
- Wildcard: Someone must mishear one word and act on it.
Use all five words
parcelreluctantfaintscrawlshelter
Maximum length: 1,000 characters, including spaces.
