Your brief
- Main character: A twelve-year-old who has appointed themselves the neighbourhood detective.
- Setting: A bookshop basement during a sudden flood warning.
- Relationship: They are colleagues competing for the same promotion while trying to behave graciously.
- Weather must change: The rain ends suddenly, revealing something hidden by the water.
- Amusing incident: A character tries to whisper and accidentally activates the building intercom.
- Complication: A stranger offers useful help that creates a new obligation.
- Opening rule: Start with a small mistake that initially seems helpful.
- Structure: Give the protagonist two failed attempts before a successful third approach.
- Dialogue: Include an apology without using the word sorry.
- Ending rule: End on a line of dialogue of six words or fewer.
- Tone: Use affectionate embarrassment rather than humiliation.
- Wildcard: One character wears something completely inappropriate for the weather.
Use all five words
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Maximum length: 1,000 characters, including spaces.
