Your brief
- Main character: A teenager working their first shift in a nearly empty hotel.
- Setting: A cinema lobby during the final screening of an unpopular film.
- Relationship: The two main characters are siblings who compete over everything.
- Weather must change: The temperature drops sharply and one character is dressed for the wrong season.
- Amusing incident: A folding chair collapses very slowly during a serious speech.
- Complication: An object works perfectly for the wrong purpose.
- Opening rule: Open with a sound before describing its source.
- Structure: Use the Story Spine shape without writing the sentence starters.
- Dialogue: Include a polite disagreement that becomes clearer through word choice.
- Ending rule: End one beat earlier than feels comfortable and imply the aftermath.
- Tone: Keep the dialogue brisk while the narration stays reflective.
- Wildcard: The protagonist must give away something they expected to keep.
Use all five words
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Maximum length: 1,000 characters, including spaces.
