Your brief
- Main character: A postman carrying a letter addressed to a house that no longer exists.
- Setting: A nearly empty commuter train delayed between stations.
- Relationship: They are neighbours who communicate mainly through notes.
- Weather must change: A rainbow appears after an argument, but nobody is in the mood to admire it.
- Amusing incident: A trolley wheel squeaks in a rhythm that sounds like a recognisable word.
- Complication: The character gets exactly what they asked for and immediately regrets the wording.
- Opening rule: Start with a small mistake that initially seems helpful.
- Structure: Give the protagonist two failed attempts before a successful third approach.
- Dialogue: Let one character misunderstand a perfectly clear sentence because of context.
- Ending rule: End with a callback to a phrase used earlier.
- Tone: Keep the dialogue brisk while the narration stays reflective.
- Wildcard: Nobody may use a mobile phone to solve the problem.
Use all five words
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Maximum length: 1,000 characters, including spaces.
