Your brief
- Main character: A person rehearsing a difficult conversation aloud who is unexpectedly overheard.
- Setting: A nearly empty commuter train delayed between stations.
- Relationship: They are neighbours who communicate mainly through notes.
- Weather must change: The temperature drops sharply and one character is dressed for the wrong season.
- Amusing incident: A formal meeting is interrupted by an ice-cream van tune outside.
- Complication: The character gets exactly what they asked for and immediately regrets the wording.
- Opening rule: Open with dialogue, but do not identify the speaker until the second paragraph.
- Structure: Let the first solution create the second problem.
- Dialogue: Let someone change the subject twice for a reason the reader can infer.
- Ending rule: End by revealing why an apparently comic detail mattered.
- Tone: Use restrained absurdity: nobody comments on the strangest detail.
- Wildcard: A minor character must have an unexpectedly specific hobby.
Use all five words
stubbornstainscrapeawkwarddrowsy
Maximum length: 1,000 characters, including spaces.
