Your brief
- Main character: A taxi driver whose passenger gives directions to a place the driver remembers differently.
- Setting: A remote bus stop whose electronic sign shows an impossible destination.
- Relationship: One character used to be the other's teacher.
- Weather must change: Fine drizzle follows the protagonist everywhere despite a dry forecast.
- Amusing incident: A folding chair collapses very slowly during a serious speech.
- Complication: The only witness remembers the sequence backwards.
- Opening rule: Begin with a character arriving somewhere one minute too early.
- Structure: Use a quiet reversal instead of a shock twist.
- Dialogue: Include a polite disagreement that becomes clearer through word choice.
- Ending rule: End with the same object from the opening but give it a new meaning.
- Tone: Make ordinary events feel faintly mysterious.
- Wildcard: Someone must mishear one word and act on it.
Use all five words
detourjangleshelterreluctantparcel
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