Your brief
- Main character: A retired bus driver who knows everybody's route but nobody's secret.
- Setting: A canal lock on a windy Sunday morning.
- Relationship: One is the other's former boss and still keeps giving instructions.
- Weather must change: A thunderstorm knocks out the power for exactly seven minutes.
- Amusing incident: Someone sits on a cream cake they were supposed to deliver.
- Complication: The protagonist solves the practical problem but makes the social problem worse.
- Opening rule: Start with a small mistake that initially seems helpful.
- Structure: Write three short scenes separated by blank lines.
- Dialogue: Include a joke that fails, then matters later.
- Ending rule: End on a line of dialogue of six words or fewer.
- Tone: Keep the dialogue brisk while the narration stays reflective.
- Wildcard: Someone must mishear one word and act on it.
Use all five words
splinterstaleordinaryrecklesspeculiar
Maximum length: 1,000 characters, including spaces.
