Your brief
- Main character: A twelve-year-old who has appointed themselves the neighbourhood detective.
- Setting: A nearly empty commuter train delayed between stations.
- Relationship: One owes the other a small favour that has become strangely important.
- Weather must change: A thunderstorm knocks out the power for exactly seven minutes.
- Amusing incident: A character tries to whisper and accidentally activates the building intercom.
- Complication: The obvious route is closed for a reason nobody can explain.
- Opening rule: Start with a small mistake that initially seems helpful.
- Structure: Make the midpoint change what the protagonist thinks the problem is.
- Dialogue: Include an apology without using the word sorry.
- Ending rule: End one beat earlier than feels comfortable and imply the aftermath.
- Tone: Keep the tone warm and gently comic.
- Wildcard: The protagonist must give away something they expected to keep.
Use all five words
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Maximum length: 1,000 characters, including spaces.
