Your brief
- Main character: A retired bus driver who knows everybody's route but nobody's secret.
- Setting: A quiet office on the evening before everybody moves buildings.
- Relationship: One character admires the other, who has completely misunderstood why.
- Weather must change: A rainbow appears after an argument, but nobody is in the mood to admire it.
- Amusing incident: A formal meeting is interrupted by an ice-cream van tune outside.
- Complication: A deadline becomes thirty minutes earlier.
- Opening rule: Start with a small mistake that initially seems helpful.
- Structure: Give the protagonist two failed attempts before a successful third approach.
- Dialogue: Use no dialogue tags for a six-line exchange; voice alone must identify speakers.
- Ending rule: End with a decision rather than an explanation.
- Tone: Keep the dialogue brisk while the narration stays reflective.
- Wildcard: A minor character must have an unexpectedly specific hobby.
Use all five words
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Maximum length: 1,000 characters, including spaces.
