Your brief
- Main character: A retired bus driver who knows everybody's route but nobody's secret.
- Setting: A suburban garden during a neighbourhood party.
- Relationship: One owes the other a small favour that has become strangely important.
- Weather must change: A rainbow appears after an argument, but nobody is in the mood to admire it.
- Amusing incident: A child confidently introduces two strangers as though they are old friends.
- Complication: The obvious route is closed for a reason nobody can explain.
- Opening rule: Start with a small mistake that initially seems helpful.
- Structure: Let every scene end with a new decision.
- Dialogue: Include a truthful answer that deliberately creates a false impression.
- Ending rule: End with someone finally asking the question the reader expected at the beginning.
- Tone: Make the ending unexpectedly tender.
- Wildcard: Someone must mishear one word and act on it.
Use all five words
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Maximum length: 1,000 characters, including spaces.
